by CorruptingPower
Very enjoyable as always , great sex scene , also good finding out more of the logistics being used as the fightback against the virus intensifies. Cya in 2 weeks
Would like to see a chapter where he has to leave new eden to give some of his women their weekly dose of sex while they are away on a job or something
IMO, dirty talk and swearing are one thing....but having Sarah use "fuck" every other word is more distracting than anything. It would be better if you mixed up the swear words instead of using the same one over and over, especially in the same sentence.
If anybody actually said "totes" in my presence I'd smack the stupid out of them instantly as an involuntary self-intellectual-defense mechanism, no matter how hot or naked they were. This should be reserved for portraying characters as child level stupid and this isn't really a story about mindless bimbos.
I'd be similarly inclined if I heard anybody brutalize "sarah" as "sares" or "piper" as "pipes" - it's just repulsive.
Glad to say I've never heard of any of these abominations in reality so I've yet to find out what prison is like.
I'm glad my name is one syllable and not prone mutilation. I feel sorry for ALL other people.
Nitpicking of course - the series is awesome.