by BirchesLoveBooks
You skipped a few days it seems. Ended the last post as how you started this one
Thank you. Don't stop. You write really well. I enjoy your story and appreciate the expansion of the Quanteam world.
Nice work.. only suggestion is better descriptions of the ladies as they arrive....
Very interesting and quite original story, likeable characters and great writing. It’s a hard-to-put down tale, awaiting the next chapter eagerly. Thank you for your work!
I've started to branch out from the main QT storyline by CorruptingPower and BreakTheBar's spinoff. If the rest of them are as easy to read, as relatable and as fun as yours, I'm hooked. I'm digging the easygoing humor and am curious about the "EVENT" that caused Aaron to up and leave without letting anyone know. Here's hoping you'll go and dig into that in future chapters of this story.
This is one of the more interesting branches to me as it directly deals with a major problem that people would face in reality if a situation like this were to occur: where is the food to keep everyone alive going to come from. Your characters are great and I'm getting invested in them but I really want to know more about project Breadbasket and seeing how all the logistics of keeping survivors that are scattered across a huge country fed is going to work out.
I hope the delay is because the next submittal is going to be 3 three times as long. This version of QT is a bit closer to my preferences because I grew up in a small farming community. The potential for introducing oddball (good, bad and in'between) characters is unlimited.
Great story! The only thing I'd suggest is to add more to it. More robust. I especially like that you are exploring areas not covered over by other authors , e.g., fly over areas, food supply, etc. Farming in particular is critical as it impacts all of the other areas addressed by other author's stories. Kudos and thank you!