All Comments on 'Quaranteam: Mike's Hurdles Ch. 01'

Great start!!!!!!

Looking forward to many more chapters!!!!!!!!!

Great start.

I was disappointed that Mike has yet to show much concern for his friends, teammates and his coach who are showing symptoms. I wonder how he will fell when they are found dead because he didn't think to mention them also being ill?

The utter chaos and random survival and matching, combined to ith the influence of rich or connected people seems very realistic. He will have difficult dynamics when the terrible rich girl interacts with the other women. I hope he can use sex to control the rich girl. Where will they live, the new officer can't just move to be near the likely horrible rich fil/ dad.

It seems like about every person in that area is a dead man walking. if the af has enough people, why aren't they just grabbing folks and trying to find matches? Also I'm stuck, the two HS kids are really just kids (not legally, but I can't imagine the trauma I'd have felt if that happened to me my last year before college).

I love it and I think it's great getting the perspective of a guy under 20 years old, this could be really interesting if they got whatever players that are still there for the tournament vaccinated. younger guys will have a lot more stamina and time to impregnate as many fertile females as possible.

Great Start! Iam looking forward with where you go military academy graduate, 3 freshman/ sophomore college age adults ripe for growth and learning/shappibg.

Thank you. It’s a great beginning for a series.

Good start. A (very) different approach, but nice.

One question: no NDA or similar to sign?

Not long and Mike will have his own personal soccer Team. Then all he needs do is find a complete opposing team. In America. Yeah, he's got trouble.

I was disappointed that Mike has yet to show much concern for his friends and teammates. I wonder how he will fell when they are found dead while he was getting laid.

Please continue!!!!!

Outstanding new scenario for the Quaranteam universe! I love that the collection of authors pursuing this have all put together unique points of view and individual perspectives. You've given each of your characters unique and different perspectives, and you're an excellent writer. Can't wait to read more.

Whole new meaning to soccer moms!

Good Start and quick ramp-up. Curious to see where this goes

That's right, Anonymous, I also have trouble getting off on written internet porn if the writers don't suckle at Trump's teet... oh wait, that's just you.

@Smartest1

No NDA as of yet. The simple answer is there were too many balls up in the air and no one has had a chance to even consider that yet.

Definite 5. The first chapter of another great story. Keep up the great work.

Good start, well written for a first story published on Literotica.

Wonderful start. Keep post your next soon. As in days not months like the professional writers on Patreon. I've added you to my following list. Thanks again, and Stay safe.

A good first entry into the Quaranteam universe welcome and thanks.... Very enjoyable read.

What a great new take for this universe. Thanks for your contribution and for a HOT story!

Nice. I like the pace of this story. Already up to three partners. Some of the other stories build a little too slowly for my taste

Great start to the story. Wouldn't it be great if, in the morning, they were knocking on his door with a minor celebrity in tow.

Obviously Emma is more experienced. But this celebrity could even be an older woman. He seems like the kind of guy who would adapt since she needed him.

Loki I think the NDA would have been left behind in a mother's rush to see to her son's safety. Also, it's not like there were unlimited doses available so let's not make this a mass Vax event. Mom would have thrown in enough doses for her son to be safe.

Was going through the story again and noticed he marked the upper limit at 45. I was not thinking that old when I said an older woman. But it's you writing the story. Maybe you already had something in mind. And what about the girl who rejected both his friends. Any way to have her show up at his door and then he asks if she can get the shot. Maybe she shows up looking for Cindy.

5 stars for an excellent start! Please keep the chapters coming.

Now THAT was just fun reading. Thank you for this! I'm looking forward to your continued efforts.

Typo: "Shegrabbed both of Mike's hands" missing space.

Great start mate.

This could be real interesting.... Mix one virgin male soccer player, one virgin Air Force cadet, one female irgin soccer player, and one rich girl with submissive tendencies. Imprint the three females on the male as quickly as possible. Stand back. The after imprinting day will be a real doozy!

Great start, lm gonna like this tale too.

Read on.

5/5