All Comments on 'Quaranteam - North West Ch. 15'

Another great chapter! Checking in and progress for all the plotlines was awesome (unless I am forgetting something). Thanks for another chapter.

great plot line update, good to know how things are progressing,

looking forward to more future updates

It seems that all my current favourite stories here are yours - AMA, The OF Girl, and this one (which I actually prefer to the original). I eagerly await each new chapter in all of these stories. :)

In between updates, I re-read them. I hope you keep up the good work! :)

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Mary the next one to be rescued, again?

Waiting patiently for the next part.... Well, not THAT patient.

Well, fuck. That's not ominous at the end *at all*.

Great update!

Just so so so good as always. That bit of foreboding at the end though, that was ominous as fuck. Have to agree with the other commenter, your stories all make up my top stories. Thanks for sharing!!!

I think Kara is going to be next one to join because she gets the virus and needs a way to live. But as the other posters have said, I don't like this ending as it seems off and like something bad is about to happen to Mary.

So Miriam, Mary (after being rescued again), and at least three of the Valkyrie Falls ladies will be joining. He's going to need a bigger house (that hasn't even been built yet). Oh, and Kara. She'll be along at some point as well. Much bigger house.

You know I've been reading the original story line since the beginning and it is great but the one area that I do like this story line better is how it addresses the breakdown of society. If you had 85% male and 15% female death rates society would completely breakdown! Keep up the good work!

I hate when the mrs answers with “fine” cuz it’s anything but.

You've done a great job over the past couple of chapters setting this story up for its next phase. I'm ready and interested to see where it goes next.

Obviously the commune is trouble for Mary and the kids. The family will need saving and Mary will end up another lover for Harri or living at Valkyrie Falls.

Either way l’d bet quite a few baddies are going to end up deader than a dried Dingos donk.

They should be stockpiling supplies. Things are going to get rough. Otherwise a great story

I am still hoping that you move the new vaccinated. community to Jewels, and leave Harrison property alone. Because getting it back after a hundred years , is going to be murder on a large scale. Or will it be a massacre.

The chapter opens up the story enough to keep suspense.

Seems unlike the original series, here the heros partners may be already known characters.

Looking for word to the plot development. 5*

Enjoy the story more than the original. He lets his political leanings out way to strongly in his story line. And his vast ignorance about farming caused me to waver between hysterical laughter and disgust. Keep up the good work and look forward to seeing more.

Binged on this story and gave each chapter 4-5* for overall entertainment value. But, to be quite honest, our heroes are not the brightest candle on the cake, is he? Harri (or _anyone else_) not getting suspicious of Patrick's symptoms even when having hours to think about it. Going "all wrapped up" for the groceries but flashing bare skin just for the heck of it. Going back to the city for... inks and sex toys? Going for hugs with Mary and not dropping those clothes *before* re-entering his home. And now, "she's her own woman" when the whole "commune" thing reeks of concentration camp...

And far too few questions asked. Col. Miriam admitting that far too little information has been passed ("we might need a pamphlet"), and our hero *not* grilling her for every detail he could get?

Oi vey, indeed.

"...didn't want to draw too much attention attention." Double up on attention.

So, if they were so concerned about Mary and the kids, how come they didn't even ask about where this "commune" is? They could have done some checking for her. Or is this a ploy to eliminate a dead-end plot line? Will he be adding some of the Valkyrie Fall ladies to his team? Miriam possibly? Also, the original storyline introduces plural marriage in its plot. Will that be the case here as well? When will Ivy allow Harri to actually vaginally fuck her? Be interesting to see where this story goes.

good, but I didn't like that last bit about Mary. He should check the commune out before she goes.

I bet the commune are the militant ass-wipes he's met a few times. Guarantee he'll have to play hero again.