All Comments on 'Quaranteam: Off the Grid Ch. 01-02'

Time to go AWAL the deck is stacked and the Col has hacked the local program.

I know thati was warned bu is taking a while toget to the porn. My fingers are to big to tell you more. good prose though

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Great first chapters. Welcome to the universe. Can't wait for more!!!

Somebody hacked Oracle.

Good writing. Good story telling.

A very promising addition to the universe

I would add the Quaranteam tag

Here's hoping that Cressman does not get clownfucked! I appreciate the darker tone of this entry in the QT 'verse. Looking forward to your next chapters. Great start at setting the scene!

Flannery needs Excedrin Headache #357...

Good start, promisingly good. Please add the Quaranteam tag so that we can find the story amongst the other authors stories.

Wow very sad indeed. I wish nothing good for "slim" aka slime. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter..

Please add the Quaranteam tag

Please add the Quaranteam tag

WHAT A HOOK!!! Waiting desperately....

5**. Keep the chapters coming. As this is you first here. Beware that the orginal and some follow-up authors only release a chapter on Literotica either monthly or bi-monthly. Truth be told that occasionally a second chapter appears. I allowed myself to join Patreon for more quick reading. But still found myself waiting, another victim to their Patreon greed. I have learn that the minute I see (or in the case of uTube,hear)"JOIN ME ON PATREON ", I unsubscribe or just stop watching their channels.

I have been told by one person that "No one listens to your complaints". It maybe so, but if no-one complains, the authors on Patreon will fully believe that it okay. I don't . Finally, I end my comments with Stay safe.

Stay safe.

Very different twist on CorruptingPower's frame! love the setup.

Another different look at the DuoHalo virus and how dumb people are going to be dumb. Ground zero for the anti-vaxx crowd. 3K people infected and killed like it's nothing. You're the first, I think, that actually describes how quickly kids got killed off. Scare a.s. // As for Carnes8004 from 27 days prior to me and his anti-Patreon rant... I've been following 2 of the other Quaranteam authors on Patreon for quite a while now. Both CorruptingPower and BreakTheBar. They both put out a pretty decent amount of stories, at least one a week, for the price of a big cup of coffee from Starbucks a month. Never felt dissapointed. Maybe look into sponsoring people that are actually worth it?

I have VERY BAD Asthma. I’ve died from an asthma attack. I take steroids for it, and I have a home breathing machine. I know several other asthma sufferers. I’ve had Covid 19 at least 4 times. It never even sent me to the doctor, let alone the hospital. None of the other asthma patients I know had to go to the hospital, and they’ve all had Covid multiple times.

This isn’t the only story pushing the idea that asthma = death by Covid. It just didn’t happen over the last 4 years. Covid killed the elderly with multiple comorbidities. It didn’t kill younger, otherwise healthy asthmatics.

As for the fictional disease in this shared world you’re writing in, sure, it can be as lethal as you want, but when writing about IRL viruses, it’s better if you’re accurate!

ZK

Nice start and like (while simultaneously hating) the Colonel angle you've written--nicely done.

A long time ago, in a different part of the world, I think I worked for Colonel Clownfucker....