by MissSade
1. A geek wouldn't say "is my clothes ready?" they'd know it's "ARE my clothes ready".
2. "Are you ok?" He asked almost frightful of the answer. I was still annoyed, "It is obvious that it isn't."
The first bit should be "is everything OK?".
This story is so hot. Please write more on quarantine. We need your voice.
Ignore the grammar idiot on here. Your story is brilliant.
Nice build up but then........
It needed another page (or two) to teally finish the story.
Can't judge an unfinished story.
The introduction to French kissing made me imagine what was next. Urging him to perform oral sex while you were on top is some guys dream. Men need to learn how women want love and what he can do to give her personal attention.