by Baztrachian
Just had to go and ruin a nice story by slamming WestvVirginia
Taking potshots at West Virginia is not just tactless and shitty, but demonstrates an obvious lack of creativity. Like, really? That's your best work? Incest jokes involving West Virginia are beyond passé, dude. Try harder, or at least target some other state with a statistically significant redneck population.
Good story. Don’t worry about idiots who cry about a joke. Just keep doin you.
You have a good story idea but it could use some fleshing out. The beginning (coworkers had relatives who had died but the news hadn't caught on to the story?). The ending could definitely be drawn out, perhaps another chapter. Beyond that, well written.
Good.. I never like incest where it leads to pregnancy though. BUT.. if you like the story and live in west virginia, why complain? you want it to happen.
I'm sure there were many pregnancies during this pandemic. Lots of older dads and daughters starting new families