by Eroticwriter6
It would have been a five if you had cleaned up the typos.
showing support for quarantine stories.
Wonder if Dan joins in?
What a good story. Can't wait for more adventures with Ben and Aunt Ash!!!
Thanks everyone for the support! I will proof read the next one more thoroughly, but I was just excited to get my first story out!
Great start, I don’t care about a few typos or grammatical issues,
KEEP writing !
Need more!
Please do proofread a little better but you’ve got me intrigued.
Typos and grammatical lapses be damned. This is a tight and compact story that dives right in, hits enough points for me to want another chapter.
The length is perfect to establish the tropes that the category requires, so hopefully the ensuing chapters are a bit longer now that we've dispensed with the setup.
Good job.