All Comments on 'Queen Bee Sora'

Good story but I think that she is going to go after the black guy next. Might want check your work next ti,e tho the names were switched around sometimes and a few words were wrong as well

Maybe, but you're missing the point. This was not about sex.The point was for her to be queen. And to be queen she had to get with the king.

Really great story, i wish there was more about her dominating the men in a foot fetish oriented way but it was still a good story.

I hope you make more!

There is a lack of continuity and an overuse of pronouns.

Also, asian women with d-cup breasts are unusual.

I realize that this is a fantasy, but if she is that unusual, work an explanation into the story line.

It's a good start, I hope you continue the story, so many possibilities.

I have at least two ideas for follow up stories, one that I planned and one that was suggested by multiple readers. The one that I planned is all laid out and everything. It should be written in a few weeks/months.

Still love it!

asianToy

Probs a longshot but if you do still plan on a sequel in the future please do not add any black guys. Half of the interracial stories on this site already are that.

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Great story, lots of careful word crafting to bring the parties from meeting to attraction to arousal to gratification, although not everyone gets it. The conjugal events are fantastic.