All Comments on 'Queen of the Amazons'

I would rate this a 3.5 if I could, but I rounded up to four. I love the fast paced action, but I felt like I was running a race! The total story is complete. The point of view in this story is very omnipresent and flies around wildly. (But that's not unusual for sci-fi's) Overall I liked it and look forward to seeing more.

It was almost too mechanical. It was as if whatever challenge or deal was presented to them, they easily just submitted to it at every turn without much more emotional thought to it.

On the premise I have got to give you congratulations. A nice unique idea is what made this story interesting. However, the way things moved and the talk was kinda mechanical like it was forced or something and the scene between the queen and Robert while it could have had a place in the story, it just seemed like it was out of place and didn't belong. If you edited the dialouge a little and maybe made it a little longer I have no doubt this would have been an easy 100