by Falcinator
I like it the detail is awesome and the flow was greatwould like to see where this goes
Thanks for a great story- your characters are definately unique and interesting, and I can see where they would have a life of their own; it would be great to see how they continue!
You have created an amazing world.....oh yeh..one word... AMAZING!!!!
Have you ever had any of your work published? You should seriously consider doing so.