All Comments on 'Queen of the Monsters Ch. 01'

Good start to a story, but there's quite a few grammatical errors. Perhaps look into getting an editor? It's mostly stuff a spelling/grammar checker in a text editing program won't catch, like the difference between captive and captor; both are words, but one makes more sense depending on the context

A good start. Please continue. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Great start to this story!!! I really enjoyed reading this chapter!!!! Can’t wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!

Great start. Really looking forward to seeing how the lead's character develops. Maybe the other test subjects she escapes with can become part of the deluge as well? Whatever the case, really hoping you continue this story soon. Thanks for your time.

Love it! It sadly isn't mtf which is my main thing, but still awesome. Then again, lost memories so who knows

Really good, excellent storyline and characters. If following chapters are this good it's going to be an outstanding series. Please keep the strong storyline and sci-fi feel with well developed characters. I know this is an erotica site, but please don't let it turn into a mindless fuckfest.

Strand

Liked this a lot! Kerrigan was a favorite growing up and also who doesn't love monster fucking?

Was there a part 2 to this??