All Comments on 'Queen Sarah Ch. 01: The Rise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
! Omg!

Yes. Loved this!

johndoe112johndoe112about 6 years agoAuthor
Feedback and Chapters 2 and 3

Thank you for your feedback. I'd love to hear what you thought worked and didn't work. Particularly, did the asides about the bullies add anything or just distract?

Chapter 2 is up check it out and let me know what you think.

I am still pondering where to go in Chapter 3. I'd love to hear what you all think

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