All Comments on 'Queen Yavara Ch. 58'

Sincerely one of the best stories I've read period.

I know I'm just a nobody commenter, but I really think your skills deserve more praise.

Your characters and plot development are seriously on another level. I hope you love writing this stories as much as we love reading them because if you keep going I hope this could become a future career. (I'm making the assumption that you're not a traditional published author, if you are thanks for the free work, and you being a professional would make a whole lot of sense)

Overall I just wanted to thank and compliment you for the journey that this story has been, good luck and please keep posting.

With the other critic. I've Been a huge Sci Fi/Fantasyfan for almost 50 years. This was fantastic! I've not read any previous chapters of this series so I have a lot of catching up to do. The characters are interesting. The battle scenes are exceptionally graphic. They rank up there Robert E Howard's stories.(Conan) IMYO this story would make a great movie. I'm rather stingy with ratings but this is incredible

4 Stars

DragonRider55