All Comments on 'Queen's Gambit Accepted'

by ADVCwl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good dialogue, and I enjoyed the characters. Very relatable.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 1 year ago

Much improved over your first story! Keep working.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story! Sequel please!

AileyInnAileyInnover 1 year ago

Makes an old guy aspire…

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 1 year ago

It was a good story and like most good things is best left well enough alone. The readers should be doing something on their own: creating stories in their minds to continue the adventures of Sharon and Rob. We don't need you any more with these two. Try another scenario and have some fun with that. 4*

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****Fine storyline with some unique storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

sparktjsparktjover 1 year ago

Exquisite, I thoroughly enjoyed this, it’s so authentic- which is the key to my arousal.

Crusader235Crusader235over 1 year ago

Very nice love story. Five stars

ADVCwlADVCwlover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you to you all for your comments!

postoak2020postoak2020over 1 year ago

Five stars

I'm hooked

Next chapter please

LifeUserLifeUserover 1 year ago

Really good storyline. I play chess in the park and it is awesome when young people come up and want to play or learn to play.

stewartbstewartbover 1 year ago

Well worth another chapters adventure ... ADVCwl the games afoot !

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66over 1 year ago

Wonderful story telling! Prequels not necessary, as their stories came through clearly. I don't see the need for a sequel, but if you have a great idea, go ahead and write it. 5 stars, and you have gained a follower.

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Just discovered your work and looking forwards to more. Thanks and well done.

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All good stories should create a reaction with the reader. Good erotic stories should cause a particular reaction (in my opinion)... I love reading and writing erotic stories and I hope you enjoy reading the ones I write ;-) I will be writing in different genres, so if I switc...