by JimBob44
The only characters I cared about were the little kids and the cockatoo. I'm going to reread ' Mending Broken Flowers '. That story by the mega-talented, selfsame author actually has some soul. I'm hazarding a guess the holidays work Jimbob44 's nerves this time of year.
JimBob44 can sure come up with some wild ones. Another 5.
Sorry...the story was good, until the last two sentences ruined it...1*
You seemed to really capture the essence of the south, 5 stars and funny, Not to mention surprisingly real
Having sex in a story doesn't automatically make it erotic... I was an a major appliance repairman before getting my electrical masters.. appliance repairman do not repair televisions, it is a complete separate field.
Very good ending. Also like that the story stuck to the meat and potatoes and not try to detail why the characters were so void of caring. Finally a story where irony attacks the cheater. Also guess Brian, the little turd is I for a inwanted surprise or two….