All Comments on 'Quickie'

Nice story but I kept getting distracted when the female character's name kept changing from Vickie to Sally and back.

good story, but like the comment before me, i was thrown off...

"He pushed Vicky's back so she was bending away from him then took hold of his cock and guided it towards Sally's pussy where he held it against her." - that sounds like some 3some action :)

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Like the other comments here, I was a little confused by the mixing of "Sally" and "Vicky". The story flowed reasonably well except for this, impacting heavily on how well I rated the story.

It is a bit confusing...is it Vicky or Sally. If you're going to change the name, make sure that you proofread or make sure you also change the Sally's to Vicky's. Otherwise, very hot story!

Who is sally? love your story

It flip flopped back and forth between Sally and Vicky