by fsqueeze
Would love a second chapter were he fucks his mom, and maybe his older sister. Fucking hot.
Very original. Had me hard the entire time. Nothing better than a loving mother.
Perfect. Just the right pacing, and the ending leaves room for imagination, without feeling cheated.
5* - deserves more
Tc
I agree with the other comment. This was written well and ended in a way that could expanded upon. I give this 5 stars.
It was a sweet funny and still sexy tale. I wouldn't be against reading more of this family. Thanks for Sharing!
Its a brilliantly written story. wonderful. Really hope there is a part 2 and making love lovingly. Thank you
A wonderful, caring, loving and tender, feel good story with a happy ending.
Always enjoy your work.
And wouldn't say no to more of this one. Since Dad's so willing to share.
Loved the story. Mom should have dressed his injury as his sisters watched. Two reasons: 1) a lesson in male anatomy and 2) a lesson in first aid.
kind of cool except the precum stuff. plenty of cums in my life but never a precum. i expect there was "gallons?"
You developed the characters better in this short story than some writers manage in 20K words. Really enjoy your work!
Would have liked more descriptions of the mom / what she is wearing in the various scenes. Otherwise, perfectly written story. Good work 👍
So beautiful and leads into so many possibilities of their past. Savored this tender story so much I took two days to read. Prequels and sequels could go on forever.
Brilliance in covertly hinting at the past.
Please, please write more mom/son stories. You completely ROCK at them! Just finished devouring Slippery Slope, which I feel like I somehow dreamed into existence. One of my fave mom/son fantasies, and beautifully written at that!
I wish there was a part 2, where Mom continues making amazing oral love to her son.
fsqueeze,
Come on, there's so much more to write here!
I'm glad you knew someone like her,
to write about her here. These types Moms are like
Unicorns, far and few between.
Thanks,
WB
The caring, laughing, and lust were mixed well. Wish there was more of this story but thanks for sharing with us. Great work.
I enjoyed it, but would have preferred to have the son be aggressive and the mom more passive. For example, the son could have reminded the mother that she used to kiss his boyhood injuries and then asked his mom to do it again. Begin with mom being hesitant, even as the son persisted. Finally he finds the right moment to tug her head toward his cock and forcefully but playfully command his mom to kiss it before he let's go of her.