All Comments on 'Quickie: Coworker'

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lonelyhdlonelyhdover 6 years ago
Great....

Story!!! Could use a little more editing, but just minor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
quickie: Coworker

Negligee: how did he know she was dressed in it but now only the top?

She might never have put it on, but then...a two piece negligee...hmmm.

SoNaughtySoNaughtyover 6 years ago
Great story

The editing was great! Keep up the great work!

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.