All Comments on 'Quickie: Her Sister'

Hot hot hot. You should have another chapter where Susy realizes she is jealous, tries hard to get back in their good graces, and is told that is only possible if she performs cleanup duty.

He moved from a frigid, jealous older sister, to the slut that intentionally fucked up all her relationships with men? Either way you slice it, this guy is doomed with either one of them. She misspoke the real truth at the end, then covered for it. "Remember, I've stolen lots and lots of guys out from under her... taking her ex-husband will just be another card on the deck." All you need to really know about the personality he's apparently falling for and how he's ultimately going to suffer for it.

Forgot to thank des67 for edits. Thank you!

Give this sexy young Tyson a hairy chest and abs -- he is a very sexy man!

please continue

Run forest run, april is twice as bad as suzy, you better take off for the hills

WOW! That was hot! And the way April described the way Susy thinking guys are cards, then more power to April and Tysen being together! Great story and for des67 for editing it! I will give it 5 stars!

both sisters are trash

Very exciting story. I loved it. Very will written!

This one was exquisitely written . As usual . And as far as the sisters go . With April it was definitely a mutually beneficial encounter .

My wife's younger sister & I have often flirted with each other over the years but never had the chance to get together.

You could have written the final chapter. Come on, it's going to be a hot finish. The sisters have it out, Suzy admits she married out of spite, not with love, so April drops the bomb, telling her she is PG, with the ex's baby, and they are getting married. That should do it. Keep writing. Watch your editing.

XYZ

That is an unfinished story indeed. It deserves a 5 so far. Please keep it going. Maybe the sisters get into a hot contest with each other over who can please him the most, or even wind up in a 3 some. Thank you.

Great story but with no kids I would say that there would not be a chance in hell she could get one dime of Alimony, usually if no kids and less than 10 year of marriage you only get half of the marital assets and that is it. I agree with the comments this needs another chapter. Well done 5++ stars

Great story, very sexy. Loved that little bit at the end too, it was very amusing.

5-stars.

Great story. Is chapter 2 in the works? It should be!

A story about a walking dildo, who is used by the sisters to play their mind games.

Uninspiring.

Great story -- please give us another chapter!

That is one hell of a sibling rivalry. I'd be scared of April. Despite the hot sex, maybe it's wise to walk away from the sisters. ~~JB Edwards