All Comments on 'Quickie: Is She Really?'

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

This was so hot, I think, letting her friend out her

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very interesting idea, I liked it and the ambiguous ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Who is David?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I. Loved. This.

D_O_LondonerD_O_Londonerover 1 year ago

The build up and the ambiguity makes the story.

Maybe Piper is inventing the scenario to wreck the relationship - either way, what a bitch!

writer4hire69writer4hire69over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments! The ambiguity of the end was very purposeful and I really wanted to leave the truth about Sadie up in the air.

GumbyCLRGumbyCLRover 1 year ago

What brilliant writing! This is a such a hot stroke story and a bit of a mindfuck. It also shows how thought and reason go out the window in the presence of a raging election.

I like to think of the evil grin on Piper's face as she left David to deal with the consequences of his own indiscretion.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Good going, you write about a slut and a really nasty woman so well

ContrahentContrahentabout 1 year ago

What an ending. Did he just screw up? Who knows? Piper knows.

5 stars.

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