All Comments on 'Quickie: Mother's Milk'

Part 2 where she has his baby??

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Fffffffffuckkkkk! Sizzling. 5 + fave.

*fans self* So sexy, sensuous, and beautiful beyond all reason. You slay the mom/son dynamic every single time. Awesome work!

beautiful story - would love more!

Hot story. New points of view presented. Yes we need part 2!

Very lovely story. I hope Anna gets a baby brother to play with.

I enjoyed the story very much the slow build up that let to son feeding mom. I think a part 2 is in need with mom and son continuing also with a slow advance to mom maybe having sons baby with them raising both

This was crazy sexy and hot. I came a gallon to this.

i'M OFTEN NOT A FAN OF INCEST STORIES BUT THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!

Loved the story. I will check out some of your other work. Thanks

Well done! A different approach to a common topic. I think a Part 2 is needed.

Absolutely wonderful story.

Great job.

I look forward to hopefully seeing another chapter.

If you decide not to write one, hit me up.

One of the hottest stories on here.

Made me nostalgic for when the wife was still breastfeeding. Great story. Really well written.

A Well written sensual story with a very unique plot! I loved it!

OMFG!!!! One of the best!

If there ever was a quickie story that needed a sequel, it would be this one. Please, do consider it.

pt 2 pls!!

Wow, just Wow!

I can give you 10 stars if I could, amazing, mind blowing, you have a way with words, you words were well thought of and perfect!!!!

HOT HOT HOT

Not bad. I hope the two of them continue to explore their feedings. It would be nice to see a chapter 2 but that depends on the writer.

Beautiful.

More please, if you can.

Definitely needs another chpt or ten! :)

Your writing is excellent at creating a feeling of great intimacy between the characters, and this is one of your best in that regard. You are also very skilled at making the sex really fucking hot without relying solely on sexual words.

So hot, wonderful Story. Maybe she needs some Milk for her face and tits

Beyond hot…And only those who have experienced it can understand…no other sexual partner can ever make you cum that hard…many years later, almost 30 actually, she seduced me again…and the same furious climax again…Enjoying your stories..

Good story now just waiting for a part 2

One of the best stories on this website. I like how you set up some refrains that take on different meanings as the story develops ("Ty, my man") and how the incestuous transgression of the characters is so well woven into other, more common needs such as being comforted that make it relatable enough to be believable.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ nuff said

Superb as always. Very hot, intimate and erotic. Loved it.

I noticed exactly one apostrophe error in three pages, so you're in the top 1% of Literotica there!

Really amazing writing, too, it feels so wholesome even when it's not at all. The vocabulary choice is phenomenal. I'm not even sure I experienced it as "hot," just as something really special, which is not at all an insult.

Not that you need anyone to tell you this, probably, but ending a story in the right place is a skill, so a choice not to continue a short story like this one is usually a good one, regardless of what other commenters say. That's how all readers are, we always want more of the story even when we know it wouldn't live up to expectations. (Of course, you called it a "quickie," so it does seem like you get this already.)

I desperately want more of this! Please don't let this be a one off.

Every man needs Mom's love

super hot, keep going, hope there a next pt.

This was an awesome story! Thanks for sharing! :-)

more please.

Yummy!

fsqueeze,

Well, you sure put a lot of story, into a little space.

This really has a great progression as a story,

really painting pictures with your words.

I felt like I could feel her softness, and smell her sweet milk.

I would ask for you to add to this, if you can.

I mean, it sounds like Mom's still hungry still in other places,

and no one wants Mom hungry.

Thanks,

WB

we know their love story doesn't end there; he's asked for more and she's willing to give more. So we all are happy- no need to spell it out- great place to stop writing. It's all still there, they'll continue on. A very sweet love story. Thank you!

WOW. Loved this story. I'm a sucker for two people caring for each other.

0utstanding

Great story, need part 2.

Wow. I feel no words suffice. Just..... Wow. (A very good wow).