All Comments on 'Quickie: Thieves' Eyes'

Wow, awesome story! Loved it.

Excellent story! To answer the question you asked at the end, technically it would be thief's eyes since you are referring to the eyes of a single thief (ie. Mom). Thieves' is the plural possessive form of the word.

Exciting mother and son story.

One of the rarest things of all on Liter, a story with a premise I haven't encountered before. Very different, weird, and oddly I suppose, almost romantic? A good read, top to bottom.

Nice story.

It would be thief's eyes if there was one thief and thieves' eyes for multiple thieves. As it's your story title either can actually work in this case.

One of the best I've read on here, Bravo! BTW-I like thieves better too.

A fine quickie. 5 + fave.

Awesome! I loved it!

Really nice, I love romantic incest stories like this. I wish you had fleshed out a bit more of a HEA ending though. Thanks for this. 5/5

Yes! Loved this one!

My understanding is that thieves is multiples, thief's are singular possessive. Or, thieves eyes are multiple sets of eyes looking at you. Enjoyed the read.

Loved the ending line! The whole thing was original and well done, thanks for posting!

Excellent. continue please.

I really enjoyed your story. It was a change to all the other mother and son stories out there

Oh my goodness, so much to love in this little quickie. Beautifully written. Your play on words and vivid descriptions are effortless and brilliantly done. I could read your stories all day every day. Fantastic!

outstanding story!! i liked the son was still mad at her while fucking her. the inner monologue was amazing, he loved but also hated her cuz she left him.. best mother son reunion.. 10/5

Ausgezeichnet!!!

fsqueeze

I know this is meant as a short,

but Christ this needs more.

Mom to his friend's house to get his clothes,

Dressing in the car, Dad seeing him being dropped off.

The Summer before collage.

So much here!

Yours,

WB

Thanks for the trouble and for sharing. A well written story, with a rather unusual narrative. Sensual, but odd, the way it panned out.

It would have been thief's, if it referred to a single thief. This would be a standard expression. The plural form would also be correct.

Tommy must have a big cock if his ex-prostitute mom was tight. From a freezing salvation to a good warmup, to giving her son her pussy all in the same night, A perfect way for Tommy to get reacquainted with his mom. Since she lives so close, he can fuck his mom regularly until he goes away to college.

Wonderful, erotic, loving, needful, yet incomplete

So much lost time, with beauty and intimacy to begin to reconnect

Only one problem...

Need more ...

Excellent couple, surely they have more trials, tribulations, and intimacy?

Five for you