by babymissesdaddy
***** This is a work of fiction and all characters in this story are fictional and over the age of 18*****
But the writer it seems is a few years short of that age. This was rubbish, been don hundreds of times before and the dialogue is ridiculously childish.
I liked it.
My only personal bug was the use of the word daddy. That one puts me off because people use it when they're trying to cross the age boundary without actually doing so and cheapens the story in general. Mix it up a little more at least. It'll be less obvious. Which Is why I'll give the story a 3/5 instead of 4/5 rating.
Erotic? Boooorrrriiinnnnggggg! Very childish dialogue and more childish sec. Or lack there of. Please don't subject increases with more trash like This.
No stars
DragonRider55
5 stars. Those who don't like it are snobs and losers. I have over a thousand pics of my stepdaughter dressed in lingerie. Sheer bras, satin garterbelts, satin sheer panties, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels. Cheerleader outfits. Bra and panties with knee high socks or frilly ankle sox.
I watch dirty talking porn videos on one side of my computer and her pics of the other. Never ceases to make me scream her name while fantasizing about cumming on her beautiful face. Hope you'll write again.