All Comments on 'Quincunx Ch. 08'

Very cool how everyone is so accepting of the new guy. I wonder why Davor isn't more worried about his sword or how Miriamni or rash since they got split up.

If your hero can so easily counteract spells and enchantments, why couldn't he get out of the slave collar?

Actually he wasn't aware of his powers back then, all he knew was he had this power to see spells. It was a power he rarely had the opportunity to use and he treated it as a novelty, of no everyday value.

So far your story is shaping up to be a very good one. You have a good mix of highly interesting plotlines and a good measuring of sex and eroticism to balance it. I hope this turns out to be a very long story, i'm very much enjoying it.

Ah, yes you did explain that in the plot, although it seemed very easy for him to access his talent, which is what confused me I think.