All Comments on 'Quincunx Ch. 11'

.. page. A good chance to practice being happy with what I have rather than disappointed about what I perceive as a lack. Thanks!

I had to cut the sections where it made sense. for those who are interested there's another sixteen to come.

I'm enjoying this story more as it progresses, but I too am frustrated by the short segments. I feel you could have paid more attention to forming chapters, or posted bigger segments. That's a fairly mild criticism though, I am enjoying it and am intrigued. Not quite reached 5 stars for me yet, but it may do.