All Comments on 'Quincunx Ch. 16'

too much sex and too little story

This story was most definitely a cock tease! Sure would have enjoyed more of a story, but I really like how this is building for their relationship. I didn't want this chapter to end.

this was not a natural place to stop!

are you doing this to be annoying or is it because you can't complete a thought?

please wait to post till you can upload enough to have it make sense.

btw have you forgotten that this whole journey started with Miriami and Rash?

why not post the real 14 as 14.1 and delete the duplicate of 13?

Love your story, keeping writing the way that works for you. This is starting to be one my favorite Sci-Fi stories on Literotica. Don't change anything