All Comments on 'Quitting Smoking Ch. 01'

Builds nicely. A bit rushed at the end, but as smoking is a particular fetish of mine, I enjoyed it immensely

If you don't like smoking read the tags or at least the title, then go find something else. There's no point in reading something you obviously won't enjoy, then giving it a bad score.

Not sure why but this one turned me on more than most

The last 3 paragraphs seem rushed because I sped up the pacing to show her excitement.

The slow conversion with audio is very sexy. Please continue the story !