All Comments on 'Rachel Takes Control'

good so far

Hope you continue, I quite enjoyed it.

to find a new girlfriend.

What is she going to do when he stands up and busts her lip and gives her a black eye? She certainly earned them.

She's a bitch. Unbelievable bad story.

If she wanted a dog why not get one? This poorly written story lacks any kind of compelling or interesting writing. In the end, I didn't care what happened to either of them. I was simply glad it ended.