All Comments on 'Rachel's Love Potion'

This... I'm a big fan of this... I demand more

You've gotta carry on

This is simply amazing! Brilliant reimagining of the classic "hot but uninterested girl turned bedroom slave" story! I love how they sort of become fuckbuddies instead.

I want a friend like Rachel!

When I started reading and I saw what happened, I thought this was going to be lame. I'm glad I stuck with it, the twist ended up being pretty good.

Had hoped at the start she would actually be a dominant shemale and make him her sub. Got a bit lame at the end.

I mean seriously, wtf? I just have to assume that has to be a joke, lol! At least I hope so.....

Where is this amazingly friendly neighborhood? I need to move. I have such lame neighbors!

“ Abuse her, humiliate her, torture her friends and family right in front of her, and she'd still be utterly besotted.

(I had less than no interest in such macabre pursuits, but still, it was nice to have room to operate.)”

Shit.