All Comments on 'Racing the Wind'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Poor, oh so poor.

A good tale obliterated by an inability to use the English language. Perhaps an editor would help.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Awesome story. Very simple, loved it. Write more of these solo sailor stories please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Neat phrase

I liked "the boundary between joy and ecstasy" referring to the lace above her hose (or below her panties?).

I'm a sailor, too, and would encourage more nautical stories. There is a nice multipart one under Incest about an uncle and his niece - as he teaches her and a friend to sail.

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