All Comments on 'Radiance Ch. 02'

Well done. I’m a huge fallout fan and am excited to read your work. You’re doing a great job and I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Ok, so still got the same issue with the grammar and punctuation.

However, I never imagined being able to identify with Deathclaws in the way you presented them. That's an awesome job.

There is a strange irony in the results of lab experiments being captured and subjected to lab experiments but it made for a good read

Very cool so far!