- Lesbian Sex
- Rags Ch. 01
- Page 5
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Click hereOscar ambled slowly towards the taxi cab, his entire mind in a state of shock over the horror he had just witnessed. The long walk back made longer by the weight of the terrible tragedy behind him. It was better that way. Despite the flickering of blue and red lights, he knew it was better that he no longer had took back there.
He finally reached his cab and got in. He could no longer hold in the emotions. He cried. He cried hot tears for two little girls who had been caught up in the violence of the inner city. He cried for the mother whose life was cut unexpectedly short. She would never again see her daughter. She would never walk her little one down the aisle, would never get to see her blossom into a wonderful young lady. He cried for the little girl who was nowhere to be found. She was dead, or worse suffering unknown horrors herself at the hands of those who brutalized her mother. He did not want to think about the little girl and how she reacted when she saw what had happened to her mother. He cried for the lack of justice in such cruel fates that had been dealt this night to two homeless girls whose only plan was to enjoy warm meals and a comfortable bed. They were going to enjoy a happy and safe Christmas in warmth watching movies and having fun in their brand new clothes. There was no justice at all in the world. He cried.
Oscar slowly pulled the car out of the parking lot, desperate to get away from the awful memory of what he had just witnessed. He turned on his light, actually hoping for once that someone would flag him down for a ride. He needed a distraction with a desperation he had never before felt when he suddenly realized he was still crying. Though the sound was so unlike him, he made an effort to quit. It wasn't working, however. He didn't feel his throat vibrating like normally it did when he cried, and his vision was fairly clear. He was upset, but he certainly was not crying, or sniffling. Oscar's eyes flew open wide as he pulled into a strip mall parking lot and came to a screeching halt.
He flew out of the car as fast as his infirmities would allow and peered through the window into the back of his cab. Lying on the floor, covered in blood, was the little girl. He gasped in fright, the only white left to be found on the child was of two tear-filled eyes contorted in such unbearable agony that he was frozen in place. After a few moments, he looked back towards the hotel, then back again to the little girl.
"Good God, child," he whispered more to himself than the frightened, blood-caked little girl lying down in the back of his cab,"what living nightmare have you just walked out of?"
- COMMENTS
Nerdyqueen94about 2 years agoThat made me throw up and cry. I read on here ro get out of my head and the horrors that haunt me there. This though well written is not for me.
Anonymousover 6 years agoSuch a powerful story, very well written full of love and emotion and for me pure sadness, I loved it! Too many stories here on literotica are just "wham bam thankyou mam" masturbatory material, badly written with no real plot........ It is so nice to once in a while come across an author who can actually write a good unique imaginative tale, thank you for sharing your work with us!
I've also read chapter 2 and find myself wondering what happened after Oscar found Layla hiding in his car, and did the rapist/murderers get caught, also who arranged the funeral etc?
Please keep writing, love Gertie X.
HiddenInTheOpenover 6 years agoIt was really hard for me to read this story. I sort of knew that something bad would happen, still, I hoped it wouldn't. Time to read chapter 2 to see how this plays out. This was well written, thank you for sharing it with us.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWasnt expecting or wanting graphic violent rape & torture in the lesbian section.
No idea where u go from here and personally i dont care. The build up was fine & loving etc...... until it went too the extreme. Amazed who ever checks these stories accepted it in this cat.
stormyeyedoneover 6 years agoAuthorFor those asking, the next chapter has been submitted and should be posted in the next few days... hopefully. =P
Anonymousover 6 years agoI skiped the whole rape scene and skimmed trough hoping for the little girl unfortunately.. ill be here for more will be waiting for the silver lining for both of the girls.. Yearning a little sunshine for both of them at least a peaceful happy one.. thank you..
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis is really great .it think every story should have a little background ,it shouldn't be all about the sex.i loved ur story ,and i hope to see more chapters.......#intriguing
VyresOfTheArtover 6 years agoPoor Anna... This was incredibly unpleasant to read, though it was well written... Hopefully Layla doesn’t have to deal with the same thing as her poor mom, but she’ll probably be forced to stay with her awful uncaring grandparents who turned her and her mom away because they “offended” their religion. What kind of people can turn their own flesh and blood away...
JoyJoy4Meover 6 years agoI cried so much for what Anne went through and for Layla to witness it all. But so glad Oscar found her. It was a real tearjerker and so well written. I can't wait for the next chapter to be submitted.
stormyeyedoneover 6 years agoAuthorThanks F. It really needed a pick up at the end. I always appreciate your input. The second story will be emotional, but a lot lighter than this. This chapter was dark, it had to be. APL., I understand your concern. Believe me, I do. Sometimes in creating something life experiences kind of spill over into the creation process. Sorry if it disturbed you, and I will leave it at that. Either way, I appreciate your honesty.
APL32over 6 years agoIf you can somehow change your beginning writer's note and warn readers about graphic rape content, that would be much appreciated. I wasn't prepared for that and it's the kind of content I try to avoid at all costs. I get it that you want to develop a story slowly and give lots of background for your characters, but I don't see how all the detail was necessary to complete your goal.
jenorma2012over 6 years agoand at the same time very sad, how can a parent turn there backs on there daughter Anna, and force her to live the way she did, now I can't help but wonder what will become of her little girl, I hope there is not too long a wait till the next part
Anonymousover 6 years agoHi K. Im very glad you added that last part to this devastating tragedy. It lightened up the story some. I am very much looking forward to the next one. FFx
