All Comments on 'Rahab Bk. 01 Ch. 09: Submission'

And very yummy too! I love where you're taking her! Thank you!

So glad you are enjoying her adventures.

I am continuing to enjoy the story, and this was another great chapter.

Thank you so much.

This series just keeps getting better, which considering its brilliant start is no small feat. I like Jess's humour too.

Thank you Pixie

Jc

Thank you so much. The final part should be up soon - but as you will see, there will be a Book 2.

I love the internal dialogue Pixie has with herself it makes in more intense. You are a true gift to the world of erotic literature Miss Hoffman!!

Thank you so much greygirl xx

Greygirl is right, your internal dialogue adds another dimension. I like to use ‘my inner slut’ or ‘my inner whore’ on occasion to react to situations, i.e. ‘my inner slut punches the air knowing her etiquette teacher would go extra thin-lipped…’. Thank you again for a great story.

Oh I love that, Evie, yes, I think my “inner slut” does something rather similar xx

While I'm not that interested in lesbian sex, the sub dom dynamic still has my attention (and the self contradictions I think most feel on either side of the dynamic). As others have said the inner dialogue is quite interesting.

Thank you so much, booboo x