All Comments on 'Rahab Bk. 05 Ch. 04: Undercover'

And the start to the day is all the more exciting for it. Love, as always darling Pix, G xxx

Each and every time you describe a lovemaking scene between Rahab and Ana, it shows more clearly how perfect their love is for each other. And it is beyond beautiful. Although they are under cover during this visit with the Khan in everyone else's eyes, they are their true, incredible selves with each other. :)

Quite beautifully done Pixie! Thank you!

I am so glad you appreciate their love - it will be the mainstay of the saga from here :)

I am so glad you are with me on this journey :)

Wow, wow, wow is all I can say. Reading this made me very hot, wishing I was the one doing the kissing and licking, or being the one being kissed and licked. If it wasn't because of where I am right now I'd be rubbing myself to a beautiful orgasm. Even if they couldn't see me they'd hear my moans of rising pleasure and, well, they just wouldn't understand. Keep it up, love.

That must be the hottest comment I have had so far, and I am delighted at giving you such pleasure.

Like all the others have said the love you write between Rahab and Ana is wonderful, and the last paragraph was great in showing it.

Thank you Pixie

Jc

It is always lovely to see your comment - thank you so much x

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoy the romance between Rahab and Ana :)

As the plot thickens and the tension increases, the love and romance are depicted in ever stronger words. Seldom have I seen such a fine description of female love.

Thank you, from my heart!

That is such a huge compliment - I treasure it.

They arrived in Yerevan is more than one sense! Beautiful, just beautiful.