by Pixiehoff
Even knowing the outcome I still held my breath toward the end. Very well done dear heart, very well done indeed. G xxx
Why isn't my life like this, getting to make love every day? I reckon that's why I like reading each episode, knowing that somewhere in the story I can fantasize about being there, pretending to be either Rahab or Ana.
I really enjoyed how the endgame happened, with Rahab faking her own death so that she could stab Dogu through the heart, as the Khan succumbed to poison. Of course, the lovemaking scene afterwards was magnificent...as always. :)
I do believe your story would make an excellent television or movie series. I mean, something needs to replace "Game of Thrones", right? And this is soooo much better!
Thank you. The beauty of fiction is you can have the love life you deserve :) xx
Giggles, well anyone in touch with a production company should get in touch :) x
The thought that goes into each one of your chapters is amazing, the plot to foil Dogu and the Khan for example, brilliant.
And you rounded this chapter off with the love of Rahab and Ana, wonderful.
Thank you Pixie
Jc
A gripping and inventive chapter, the suspense had me on the edge of my seat but Ana, Rahab et al win through winning a 5 star medal for the author :)