by Pixiehoff
...just two of the qualities that have made Rahab what she is, spiritually strong if physically weak. Another emotional and touching chapter, Pixie, but finishing well on a perfect cliff-hanger.
Your storytelling powers at their best with the death of Miriam and the embrace of Tania. Hi drama at the close but Rahab on watch again to foil the attack. Beautifully done, dear heart, beautifully done. Thank you, G xx
Thank you so much - Rahab is struggling, but her true nature is shining forth/
Thank you so much - Rahab is struggling, but her true nature is shining forth.
You have created a truly remarkable character in Rahab in how she puts Ana's needs before her own in this chapter, a true declaration of love. As Rahab walked away leaving Ana and Tania to there privacy, that touched me and I felt for Rahab, great writing. And the shadowy figures a nice contrast of emotion to end on.
Thank you Pixie
Jc
Rahab is surrounded by some amazing people. Ana, of course, is at the top of the list. Tania and Mel are incredible women. But there is also her cousin Jacob, and Commander Kunt - who continues to impress with his loyalty and commitment to Rahab. She definitely deserves to have all of these wonderful people in her life.
But now, there is yet another attack that she and her group must deal with. Let's hope they can defeat this threat too.
Thank you so much for being part of this story. You really do get Rahab. She has grown a lot since we first met her, in character at least. Now there is this new test for her.
Thank you so much. I try to make sure that Rahab's people get enough time so that you can see how special they are. I am glad you find them interesting x
Another 5 star chapter for me! I particularly enjoyed the assimilation of Tania and the subsequent celebrations by her and Ana, but also enjoyed by a watching Rahab. She is an excellent ruler, perhaps she plans to convert the world to sapphic ways, one by one xx
What a good idea - starting, as you say, with one girl at a time xxxx