by Pixiehoff
...and I'm not taking the piss! Both stories showed the power of the Ark against the forces of evil. One of the best chapters yet in the saga, Pixie, if not the best. I rest my case.
I absolutely loved the way that the Ark was defended and how the Wahhabis were defeated. Even better (for me) was Rahab's conversation with Tania, and the lovemaking scene with Ana. The combination of spirituality and sexuality was nothing short of divine. :)
This had everything, action, good triumphing over bad, tenderness, empathy, drama, love and hot sexy intimate scene.
I'm pleased that Rahab had an night alone with Ana reaffirming their love and lust for each other.
I agree with Maonaigh this chapter is your best yet. The healing scene was brilliant and I love that you don't glorify the battles in anyway, in fact you had Pixie release Abdullah and Karim.
Thank you Pixie
Jc
I am overwhelmed. This was the most difficult chapter to write, and I am so delighted to read your verdict xx
Thank you. This was a hard one to write, and getting the balance right was so hard - so your words were balm in Gilead.
I am so encouraged by this. I found it the hardest chapter to write, but am now pressing on with the next chapter.
You have clearly done a great deal of research, and it shows. What is so remarkable is how you have interwoven your research into your story seamlessly. Beyond awesome, I love it!
I am so glad this story continues to give pleasure to new readers - and to you especially xxx