All Comments on 'Raider and the Lost Lamp Ch. 03'

on the genie myth. I am enjoying the pace and the fun way you have included the incidental sex. I can also recomend your other storyline to everyone who enjoyed this. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks. UK Cynic

What a gem. The richness of detail, character development, vocabulary and so many other aspects of this story are just reeking of talent and depth. Thanks

Why, oh WHY do writers make such a piss poor decision to put dreams and fantasies inside a story. It's ALREADY a fantasy! You break the story for a lot of readers, doing this kind of thing. It takes us out of the story and we often can't get back until the idiocy is done with... But you diminish the story when you do it... Please, be better.