by Virginiawild
Yes it could've been longer, more detailed. Sometimes the thought that spawns another person's imagination is the best.
It made me realize that I don't define eye movement enough, so you taught me something here in that quick , erotic moment of lust turning to love...
can you tell I like your style:)
please keep writing!
This was a very erotic and quick read. I would have liked a more detailed description of both women's looks and bodies. That would have given me more time to masturbate before reaching the end of the story. ha ha