All Comments on 'Rainbow's Crystal Tiara'

It was so sweet! Will you please do another one.

your stories are very interesting :) would love to read lots more

This so sweet...I just loved it.

I am a classy, amture, biswxual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much. I am waiting for my prince to sweep me off my feet so I can satisfy his sexual desires.

Sincerely,

Josie of Auguta, Georgia

sweet story,could you please do a rewrite and make it longer with more drama pleeease.Great story.

I have read this story twice and I like it. There's only one thing that bothers me.

After Malvora beat him up, how did he ended up in the palace after all? Of course I can quess, I know what happens in Cinderella but maybe not everybody knows the story and they can be really confused.

Or why Malvora cut his hair away just like that. I can quess what happend like in the other one but maybe it needed an explanation too.

But I really love it and I can be wrong.

This story won several contests on another website. I wrote it on a whim because I'd already had the idea floating around in my head. As for showing when Rainbow is aided by his FAERIE godmother (a spunky crossdresser), I thought it would be interesting to show the prince's point of view instead just to make it different from the usual Cinderalla story. I will be revising this story (making it longer) for possible submission for publication. I hope that everyone who enjoyed it will support me in purchasing it when it finally comes out as well as trying out one of my other novels available for purchase. Check out my website to keep up to date with whats going on: www.levanahyll.weebly.com Thanks, Levana ;)

This story was amazing, I really enjoyed it, a mix of cute and naughty. I look forward to reading the longer version.

I love it when I find males getting pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it far more then cinderella, and maybe I am a little cold but I would simply cut out sisters eyes and cut off the stepmommies hands so they would not have to feel so envies, or worry for my hair. I never liked those ugly bitches.

While a different version, it still the basic sweet story of Cinderella. Only issue I have is since he seemed to prefer living as a woman could he not have been referenced as Queen Rainbow.

Absolutely loved this! ❤️