by destinie21
Excellent continuation of this story, with a few surprises. Well written and not badly edited, although the editor missed a couple of misspellings. Doesn't take anything away from the story though, really. Very glad part 3 is coming.
...This story would be the definition.
Very well written and thought out. This is the best story I have read on Literotica in a long time. I cant wait to read the next installment.
i just read your first part of this series, and now this one, all i can say is amazing. I can't wait for part three to come out
It's always good to see a family getting along well...two sisters and their mother in a menage a trois? Wicked! (and so erotic...can't wait for part three! Thanks in advance.)
I had to give this a 5 because it was so well written. I just loved all the references to oral, and the cunnilingus scene was probably the best I've ever read. I could practically taste it !
Great job
Best. Erotic. Story. Ever. Keep up the good work...waiting in anticipation for chapter 3 =D
I read the first chapter, loved it, and yet I think this one may be even better. I love the way the story goes, and will admit that I'm eagerly anticipating the 3rd installment in this delightful series. Keep up the good, no, the -great- work. :)
you made poor Raine think that she was going crazy, imagining her mum was looking at her!
and at least we know why Sheri was so experienced!! ;)
well done that was fantastic. cant wait to read the rest!
Wow! The depth of emotion and suspense in this story is fantastic! It is so very enjoyable to read words that come to life! Thank you for sharing your talent!
Good christ its colombian not columbian why do americans insist on miss spelling my countrie's name
This story is beautifully told. It shows love is divine and sublime, no matter any other constraints imposed or imagined.
I love the way you write. I am not into the sexual content but into the romantic one. So the story interested me until the mother. What else after the mother ? the family dog? Such a waist of a beautifully written story.