All Comments on 'Rainy Homecoming'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Clever but Boring

Your concept of a joint writing is a clever idea and has potential. The story was too boring to finish reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well written

Very well written and hot to read. But where does the milk come from? Do they both have babys? 😂

stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
Sexy collaboration

Short and sexy

The two writing styles fit perfectly together and compliment each other so well.

Some back ground on Genia and Sarah would of added to my enjoyment but a good erotic read.

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