All Comments on 'Raising Beautiful 04'

Your is the possessive form of the word, e.g. Your bike. Example: Are we going to your apartment tonight?

You're on the other hand is a conjunction between the words you and are. Example: "Oh, you're watched regardless of what you do."

Try finding a decent editor and a lot of these mistakes will be fixed. In fact, if you just did a global find and replace between these terms, you'd be right more often than you are now. I like the story, but the grammar needs work.