All Comments on 'Ransom Ch. 04'

I was wondering if this story was going to be continued as so many aren't. But here it is another excellent instalment. I enjoyed the fun element as well as the sex as well as the interaction between the characters. I see exploitation ahead as Kailee takes advantage of Jakob's burgeoning crush. Please, please let it be a spanking!

AmandaSarah, this chapter is fantastic!!! Even lacking constant internet connection you made a chapter I re-read twice! Nathan and Mira *swooning* and I guess we were thinking alike with the fabulous blow-job scene! *double-swooning* I think Jacob is not the only one developing a crush :p

I see this story is going to become a full time job :p - I am definitely coming back every day for updates!!!! :D

Ha! Just love how you ended this! But the poor girl needs to get off ;) More please!

Be nice after the ransom is paid to see her hunt him down and chain him up before......

Oooo, that was hot! Small payback. Nathan and Mira are cute, and I can't wait for more of that.☺

She does have a brass pair on her.......I like it. She's giving as good as she gets and that definitely suprises and arouses him. Nicely done chapter

Still think she was stupid for doing what she did, and still think Dom is a huge jerk.

that was hot! *fans self dramatically*

I love how Dom wins and lets Kailee think she's ahead but then brings her right back down again with his dominance. Love this story, you are a good writer!!

Thanks for all the great feedback so far!

Notusuallyshy - I plan on continuing to the end, it just might be a slow process. As for the spanking - you'll just have to wait and see...

IsabellaRoggi - you read my mind with the blow job scene! Maybe I need to be less predictable ;)

ShyGirlLost - Haha! I'll give her what she needs soon, I promise!

Some lovely person emailed me telling me my stories are drivel, nobody reads them and to stop writing. I couldn't reply, because they didn't leave their email address so in response, I'll just keep writing in the hopes that it pisses them off even more :D

Thanks once again :) xx

I find it so funny how some people find the time to write such emails, complaining and making useless claims but at the same time to shy (read: fu$#@×÷ cowardly) to write a contact to reply to them. What a weird world we live in!

AmandaSarah, I am by no means an author and I have yet to write to any of the authors whose stories I didn't like (and I would say there are quite a few) but I can share my opinion of you - I consider your stories well written with clear language and above all, fun to read.

Looking forward to the future chapters...how are you doing with that? :)

Haha thank you darling! I'd like to say I'm close to finishing another chapter, but I have to admit I've been procrastinating a little bit! You can partially blame WaterBurn for posting her next chapter ;) Hoping to do some serious writing next week! Feel free to message me if you want quick replies - I don't check my comment page very often xo

BUT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY!!!!! I know you have no internet atm and everything, but I just can't cope with the heartache I get every time I log on to find no new chapter!!

The story is soo well written. Hope you update soon.

I really hope you write more! And soon! I've read all of the chapters for both of the stories and they are both captivating. Great work! Looking forward to chapter 5 :)

Oh please update this ~ I Check everyday of you have updated this and everytime i see it's not im really sad :(

..it is time for me to start whining again when the next chapter will be out ;) hoping it will work like last time :)

NOT CONTINUING?!?!?! Omgggg been waiting for damn long, please update!!!!

Please update soon!

I know, I know...you all must hate me for taking so long! Travelling in the outback and writing doesn't mix so well. I've arrived home to a load of emails demanding an update so here we are....chapter five has been submitted :) As for Just One Game, I'm working on it.... Sorry for the wait and I hope you enjoy!! xx

Never continue. Where's any kind of originality or cleverness?

Get out here anon and look for your 'original' storyline elsewhere. This story is very well written, hot, and that sexual tension burns right through the screen. Keep it up!

..than a serious kidnapping. It’s just as well really because if this was a serious kidnapping she would never have tried ANY of the things she’s tried so far. Any sensible kidnapping victim would be more concerned with requesting a blindfold whenever they plan to be in the same room with her. After all she can ID them now.

I enjoyed the development between Mira and Nathan.

Tess (UK)

Nice finish