by fantasticfic
Gross. Three equally dislikable snd ugly people having absolutely horrid sex. Ick! Well written. But… it’s like a horror story. Watching a train wreck. When did kindness become so forgotten? All so foreign? Am I just that old and naive? I think love-making should be fun and life-affirming. There should be a modicum of love, or at the very least a skosh of like in sex. Again, vey well written. I felt like I got a true sense of all three characters. And I never want to read about ANY of them again! Yuck. Yuck. And YUCK!
Hi Grant, I'm glad you got it even if you didn't like it. If you need an antidote to restore your faith in humanity, I would recommend Guidance as my warmest story. I was playing with something pretty misanthropic here! I do have some proper love stories I'm working on too though.
Horrible yet wonderful. Loved it.
I prefer buttface to butterface (not that butter should be used as lube), or the acronym BoBFoC...
Grammatically and narratively this story is good. However, the intensely classist themes of the story make this terrible. I don’t give a flying shit about how much a council flat is worth, and not all working class people are ugly - combining the two in one story is a right turn off. Probably goes down a treat at the local conservative club
This is so fucking mean and trashy... definitely in the realm of guilty pleasures for me <3