All Comments on 'Ratboy And Butterface'

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CoolboiyzCoolboiyzover 2 years ago

Great narration.

Fan of your stories!

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 2 years ago

Gross. Three equally dislikable snd ugly people having absolutely horrid sex. Ick! Well written. But… it’s like a horror story. Watching a train wreck. When did kindness become so forgotten? All so foreign? Am I just that old and naive? I think love-making should be fun and life-affirming. There should be a modicum of love, or at the very least a skosh of like in sex. Again, vey well written. I felt like I got a true sense of all three characters. And I never want to read about ANY of them again! Yuck. Yuck. And YUCK!

fantasticficfantasticficover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Grant, I'm glad you got it even if you didn't like it. If you need an antidote to restore your faith in humanity, I would recommend Guidance as my warmest story. I was playing with something pretty misanthropic here! I do have some proper love stories I'm working on too though.

KumquatqueenKumquatqueenover 2 years ago

Horrible yet wonderful. Loved it.

I prefer buttface to butterface (not that butter should be used as lube), or the acronym BoBFoC...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Grammatically and narratively this story is good. However, the intensely classist themes of the story make this terrible. I don’t give a flying shit about how much a council flat is worth, and not all working class people are ugly - combining the two in one story is a right turn off. Probably goes down a treat at the local conservative club

Diamondking666Diamondking666over 1 year ago

This is so fucking mean and trashy... definitely in the realm of guilty pleasures for me <3

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