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by ChocolateDeviant

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GadolfssonGadolfssonabout 4 years ago

A great and well-written story, with a surprisingly sweet ending. I like it!

ChocolateDeviantChocolateDeviantabout 4 years agoAuthor
Re: Gadolfsson

Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I wanted to try writing something a bit more fun and lighthearted

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story!

Excellent story telling and great ending. Well done.

BlowPopJBlowPopJabout 4 years ago
If I could

I would 5 star this more than once. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
really

i would love to shove a stick of dynamite up each of their asses then let them fuck themselves to death

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Ravaged & Impregnated!

OMG, a faithful hot-wife story. Kudos! You are a great writer and it shows. It was erotic, suspenseful, it was paced just right, and the surprise ending was delightful. Please keep writing!

DarknsDarknsover 1 year ago

A surprising ending with a wonderful twist. Well done. 5 stars.

Another pleasant surprise is to see one of my fave authors, Gadolfsson with the classic Summer’s Eve, commenting how he enjoyed this story. That in itself is a great compliment, IMHO.

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Welcome to my author page! If you like stories that involve attractive men and women going at it, mortal enemies unleashing their frustrations on each other, or couples slowing down and enjoying themselves, then this is the place for you! Just a note: It would be a safe assu...