All Comments on 'Ravishing a Succubus, The Price'

Not totally sure about how she collects the orgasms, per se. Can you be more specific? As in, what, he comes 3 times but doesn't get to feel it?

Grammar. Spelling. Words. It is important and you blew it.

...there are some errors that do distract from the story. Keep writing and read your work to yourself before posting. It does help catch most of the mistakes.

A bit short hope the next chapter gives more than a minute's read, then it should be deserving of five stars.

This has way too many errors. You can't just count on your spell checker. If you do you will end up saying trust when you mean thrust, and several similar errors. Otherwise the story has potential.

loved the story. everything made sense and the characters actions were believable

Hope your planning on making another chapter to tell about what happens next. All in all good story