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All Comments on 'Raymond My First Man Pt. 01'

by JoannePare

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Darling

Script ok apart from too many DARLINGS spoilt it for me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
My Darling

Way overused here. I saw so many even before i got too far into it that is ruined the rest of it. Would be fine otherwise, A 2 star for me.

VanessagurleyVanessagurleyabout 7 years ago
Yes, too many darlings

But a very erotic read and one of my fantasies

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lovely story!

I just love your story! Fantastic dialog and great story line! I can't wait for more

woodseaveswoodseavesover 1 year ago

Wonderfully passionate. Joanne, you are so delightfully feminine. Were you a woman in an earlier life?

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