All Comments on 'Real Sales Bonus'

That depends on whether there is a 2nd chapter of the delivery weekend and what happens then. In any case she didn't fuck him to make a sale but because she was so turned on by him and the erotic circumstances.

Totally agree with you.No romance at all.I wonder what the hell is admin doing.Don't they moderate which content belongs to which category.

This story was completely waste of time.

Author please post such stories with no Romance in Erotic couplings.

Not a bad little vignette; could do with a little more of the breathless excitement because here she is screwing the STAR. You've seen some readers missed that point.

Definitely not a romance, and not even really romantic. Just a major notch on her headboard, so Erotic Couplings it is. Clearly, the Lit robots have no clue about the meaning of romance, or about half the stuff in here would go away.

Final point: does no one understand semi-colons? My grade school teacher would have red all over your story - and a great many more; it's not just you - CS for comma splice. Is it not taught any longer?

This is NOT ROMANCE. I'm fairly sure you can remove this and then publish in EC.

What a sly dog he is, or is it she? Nice tale.